Music treatment

Rihanna- P.s I'm Still Not Over You
The scene commences with a female in her bedroom looking out her window, who is very upset and is trying to write a letter to her ex boyfriend. This will be filmed and will show what she has written down. This letter will be about her explaining that she is not over her ex, there will be various previous letters scrunched up around her on her bed. She will then finish writing the letter but then again, she will rip it up as she is in two minds about sending it.

The next scene then cuts to a flashback of when the female and her boyfriend would be around his little brother playing, this will be her reminiscing so to symbolise that this is something that happened in the past, a black and white effect will be used. Furthermore, the next scene will be split in four screens and one by one old video clips/pictures appear of memories of the couple. In the four different screens they will be doing something very different in each and will all be located in different places.

Within the song Rihanna talks about being able to rewind time and how badly she misses him. There will be a calander counting the days since she has seen him, which hasn't just been a few days but several months. The calander will have a marker pen crossing off the days which will symoblise just how much she is missing him and thinks about him every single day.
 

She then runs upstairs rapidly locks herself in her room, picks up a jumper (the scene will then quickly cut to a mid-shot of the male, her ex wearing this jumper) and cuts back to the female in her room who is clenching tightly onto this jumper and tears begin to roll down her face.

Clock slowly rewinds back the time to the first day they met, when they were young kids and lived round the same area and shows the first time they talked in their local park.

Feedback:

Deniece -
WICKED!

Precious -
It's good, it's in a lot of detail, the concept is very contemporary with young people and love which is a good thing. I just don't understand the beginning part of why she rips the letter.